Eternal Conditional Love

When the sun sets in the morning
and rises late at night, 
and dogs hop on lily pads,
and frogs viciously bite,
that's when I'll stop loving you,
and not one day before,
unless, I find, regrettably,
that you loudly snore.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 4:44 PM
funny....I agree. Snoring is a deal breaker! Enjoyed this poem, have a pleasant evening, Sara
Crandall Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 9:39 PM
haha, yep!
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