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Eternal Breath

I am lost without you My cries longing for your touch. I scream in anger "I Need You!" Why did you have to go? My heart is broken, like shattered glass into a million pieces. I lay in agony on the floor. Can't eat or sleep, time stands still. Waiting but knowing you will never come back to me. Pictures scattered with tear drop stains. Nothing can seem to heal my pain but time. Until I take my dying breath your memories I will keep. Lisa Gomez

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/15/2013 6:15:00 PM
very moving and powerful words that hit the heart
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Date: 11/6/2013 7:42:00 AM
Sad and romantic piece.
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Date: 11/3/2013 8:29:00 PM
Wow what a powerful loss you've encountered,,,,,all the best to you
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Date: 11/3/2013 4:39:00 AM
Love it and can relate be well my dear.
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Date: 11/2/2013 5:47:00 PM
Very deep with so much sincerity,, awesome poetry
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Date: 11/2/2013 12:33:00 PM
- Proficient, Lisa - Touching written - Good luck in Gail Contest! - A little difficult topic to write about, I think. - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:35:00 PM
Time hurts ... and heals! Ty 4 sharing.
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Date: 11/1/2013 12:38:00 AM
The pain pierces the heart
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