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Eternal Breath

As you lay sleeping Entombed in the ground below The memories of you come rushing in Of the love you bestowed Your laughter, Your warm embrace, Your breath upon my face I linger in this tome of memories Moments frozen in time - It is here you will always live And it is here you will never die- Bound together by moments in time Jan Cannon

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/30/2013 8:09:00 AM

Sorrowful and beautiful. Congrats on your win.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/28/2013 5:40:00 AM

hi Jan congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/27/2013 4:00:00 AM

many congrats on your top spot jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/26/2013 9:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan

Donna Jones

Date: 11/26/2013 7:55:00 PM

I love the moments in time ...congratulations on your lovely win...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/26/2013 5:20:00 PM

Jan, that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/26/2013 2:40:00 PM

- Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/31/2013 12:18:00 PM

A well done and touching piece.

Laura Cannon

Date: 10/30/2013 8:56:00 PM

What a lovely work of art. So touching.

Jan Cannon
Date: 10/30/2013 9:49:00 PM

thank you Laura for your comment