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Eternal Bliss

If only you could recognize, the beauty in your big doe eyes- A shade of hazel and with a splash of grey, to match your moods on cloudy days, like a swift white dove, your pink soul flies. A dwelling place you made in me, a love so eloquent for all to see- Innocent with grace is your lovely face, walks with hands held, without a trace, with pebbles below our toes by the willow tree. I’ve mellowed serenely since meeting you dear, as you softly whisper in my ear- The aspect of your depth and aspirations, brings me hope with sincere motivation, your goodness is always welcome here. Before God invented man on earth’s plane, I was lost in contradiction, going insane- The way you tremble when I am close, is to me what really matters most, your soft heart flows right through my veins. I needed passion that I couldn’t resist, and to think of all the joy I’d miss- Your affection has taken my breath away, as I long for one more romantic day… for you my love, are my eternal bliss. July 11, 2017

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Date: 7/28/2017 3:41:00 PM
many congrats on your win LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/14/2017 9:26:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 7/13/2017 9:57:00 PM
Congrats on your placement with this lovely romantic write.
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/14/2017 12:40:00 PM
thank you lovely Agnes :)
Date: 7/13/2017 8:37:00 PM
What a glorious work and a wonderfully romantic relationship ... exquisitely penned, and a hope for all of us who long to love again. I have met two soul-mates in my life, so I know it's possible, but I don't complain about losing them, because so few people ever find their true love ... I was blessed. I have to fav this one, Laura - love your work!
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/14/2017 12:39:00 PM
thank you Greg :)
Date: 7/13/2017 6:13:00 AM
Ditto to all the other comments, congrats Laura on a great premium win!
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/14/2017 12:39:00 PM
many thanks dear John :)
Date: 7/12/2017 12:34:00 PM
Oooh so romantic, Laura. I am happy for both of you:) Just beautiful!
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/14/2017 12:39:00 PM
thank you dear DT :)
Date: 7/12/2017 1:03:00 AM
How romantic, Luloo:) beautiful poem:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/14/2017 12:39:00 PM
thank you lovely Jo :)
Date: 7/11/2017 7:53:00 PM
Big doe eyes, ...moods on cloudy days, you...are my eternal bliss. So lovely, Luloo!
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/14/2017 12:39:00 PM
thank you sweet Kim :)
Date: 7/11/2017 6:21:00 PM
Wonderful Romance and well written, thanks for sharing Laura, kind regards, Kevin
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/14/2017 12:38:00 PM
many thanks Kevin...

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