Eternal Bliss

If only you could recognize, the beauty in your big doe eyes- A shade of hazel and with a splash of grey, to match your moods on cloudy days, like a swift white dove, your pink soul flies. A dwelling place you made in me, a love so eloquent for all to see- Innocent with grace is your lovely face, walks with hands held, without a trace, with pebbles below our toes by the willow tree. I’ve mellowed serenely since meeting you dear, as you softly whisper in my ear- The aspect of your depth and aspirations, brings me hope with sincere motivation, your goodness is always welcome here. Before God invented man on earth’s plane, I was lost in contradiction, going insane- The way you tremble when I am close, is to me what really matters most, your soft heart flows right through my veins. I needed passion that I couldn’t resist, and to think of all the joy I’d miss- Your affection has taken my breath away, as I long for one more romantic day… for you my love, are my eternal bliss. July 11, 2017
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Allison Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 3:41 PM
many congrats on your win LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 9:26 PM
Congrats!
Krampe Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 9:57 PM
Congrats on your placement with this lovely romantic write.
Scars Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 12:40 PM
thank you lovely Agnes :)
Barden Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 8:37 PM
What a glorious work and a wonderfully romantic relationship ... exquisitely penned, and a hope for all of us who long to love again. I have met two soul-mates in my life, so I know it's possible, but I don't complain about losing them, because so few people ever find their true love ... I was blessed. I have to fav this one, Laura - love your work!
Scars Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 12:39 PM
thank you Greg :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 6:13 AM
Ditto to all the other comments, congrats Laura on a great premium win!
Scars Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 12:39 PM
many thanks dear John :)
Turner Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Oooh so romantic, Laura. I am happy for both of you:) Just beautiful!
Scars Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 12:39 PM
thank you dear DT :)
Daniel Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 1:03 AM
How romantic, Luloo:) beautiful poem:)
Scars Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 12:39 PM
thank you lovely Jo :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 7:53 PM
Big doe eyes, ...moods on cloudy days, you...are my eternal bliss. So lovely, Luloo!
Scars Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 12:39 PM
thank you sweet Kim :)
Shaw Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 6:21 PM
Wonderful Romance and well written, thanks for sharing Laura, kind regards, Kevin
Scars Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 12:38 PM
many thanks Kevin...
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