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- collaboration with LU LOO - Sweetheart, you are my perpetual connection, My alleviation found in perfection- Bound by love and affection Saturated in loneliness were you- I knew the pain of loss and despair you carried with ease; Black ravens plague this existence, Yet you stay with me, longing for my hopelessness to cease, Descending onto my grateful knees- I sense your essence in the breeze The wind blows, and gusts prevail, Intense obscurity of the calamity I faced before you attains- Emerging from the dust I was found Weeping in the forsaken land of my desolated heart’s remains; and... As the tempest rages in warm rains, Your genuine adoration still sustains A million fairytales tremble at us, They know how our love does outshine with flickering light- Sounds of swift ivory doves cry out, Fleeting into the ebon night; for our love loses not insight, Never cursed or full of deep blight; I embrace you…you hold me tight For I am but a woman craving to be near you for all of eternity- And I shall feel this pure affection or you, my beloved…eternally. Submitted on September 7, 2019 for contest LU’S POEM SWITCHER-ROO sponsored by LU LOO

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Date: 10/7/2019 6:48:00 AM
amazing sweet lady! I agree with lovely Caren. Beautiful, great flow and layout. All around winner for me :) Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/7/2019 6:53:00 AM
Thanks for the opportunity to do a collaboration, Lu Loo. You seem to have done the bulk of the work though. Enjoyed it. Thanks.
Date: 9/10/2019 3:04:00 AM
I am pretty much speechless as I read this. A FAV for me, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/10/2019 7:30:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. all the credit goes to Lu Loo.
Date: 9/8/2019 9:02:00 AM
A lot of beautiful lines here...I like it
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Date: 9/8/2019 11:25:00 AM
Thanks, Arturo. All the credit goes to Lu Loo.

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