Estranged

He looks on with glasses. In the distance, the faces are blurred and it only magnifies his deep loss
Ninette form 3/23/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Prabhu Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 8:00 PM
congrats CARRIE !!!!!!!!
Rhinem Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 5:09 AM
Smile ˜ There You Are, My Beautiful Carrie * Sad Verse Yet Owww The Sweeetness, Between The Lines ˜ My Love, Forever, John!:) ˜
Merryman Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 3:40 PM
A sad picture, but a great write. Congrats on your win, Carrie! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Ninette" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 12:42 AM
Nice and deep, Carrie.I love this. Congratulations on your win.It is well deserved...
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:06 PM
congrats Carrie on a terrific win for this amazing Ninette.. very visual luv..
Susan Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 12:49 PM
wow. very powerful write! so sad... I can only hope of writing something this good. i'm faving this poem :)
Delacroix Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 12:10 AM
Sad, but very well done, Carrie! Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
Sivey Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 9:27 PM
This is truly a magnificent write Carrie! I really enjoyed this poem that I have read this evening! I love the glasses inference, very well written my friend! I loved your write immensely! Great Work!!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 8:43 PM
This is great, Carrie! A powerful image. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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