Establish

Once there was a man called Frank Benhance,
Believes writing for contest certainly enhances.
Enhance by stunt & gimmick-doubt!
Enhance by magic & trick – doubt!
Bloody, sustainable establishment - Soup poets enhance.
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Matose Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 12:57 PM
GREAT LIMERICK UNDERTAKER AND THANKS FOR VISITING ONE OF MY POEMS RECENTLY. JM
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December 3, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Thank you Joseph.(: ) Jenish.
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December 2, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today..I am glad that I chose this one ...Sara
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December 3, 2013 at 8:12 AM
Sara, thank you very much.(: ) Jenish.
Guzzi Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 7:30 PM
Hey there friend, are you mad? well, limericks are HARD and must have a certain meter [There once was a man named Benhance/ whose writing was really enhanced/by gimmicks and stunts/just watch that man punt/he cheats when he has half a chance.] It should sound more like that? Who are we mad at? growling helps me go grrrrrrrr ;) BIG HUGS! Light & Love
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December 1, 2013 at 9:25 AM
Debbie,I understand.I understand why you are not trying it.If you could write good humor and still abstain from writing.Thank you.My top priority now meter.I'll improve.(: ) Jenish.
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November 30, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Hi Jenish, I like the establishment , and encouragement from this soup bowl. Hoping them contest is a good thing... Sending hugs... LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 1:07 AM
Hi Jennish. it's good to be back to poetry soup after my little trip for thanksgiving and seeing my friends here. I agree with you. The contests really can enhance our writing!
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