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Essence of Your Love

I saw you face your lover; you both made a pattern quite distinctive in the dark. The shadows on the window shade displayed two hands that met two others; formed an arc. The hands, from arms outreached, delivering their upturned palms that now together pressed, could not release nor stop their quivering, anticipation physically expressed. Then two who stood behind a window posed, at last fell trembling into love’s abyss. Love’s essence on the shade was then transposed as bodies touched and mouths met in a kiss. Your shadow with your lover's intertwined. A valentine pulsed on the window’s blind. Written Jan. 30, 2014

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Date: 1/4/2017 9:22:00 AM
What an enchanting vision! Lovely and unique. And congrats on placing in the contest, Andrea. Carole Duet.WUC
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Date: 1/4/2017 6:28:00 AM
Wonderful piece from the past...Congrats on your win...Happy prosperous year full of blessings, great poet....
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Date: 1/3/2017 12:18:00 PM
"Tear open the shutter and pull back the sash", congratulations Andrea...
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Date: 1/3/2017 6:22:00 AM
visually perfect with sensory delight, andie... congrats and huggs.. still having internet issues.. till soon, take crae!
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Date: 1/3/2017 1:53:00 AM
Mmm a bit of voyeurism in you Andrea. I didnt say peeping Tom. Ha ha . Iove your originality and image portrayal. A great poem .
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Date: 1/2/2017 11:46:00 PM
I can see the moving shadows in my mind's eye! Great description and imagery! Congrats Andrea! :-)
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Date: 1/2/2017 10:56:00 PM
OMG! "A valentine pulsed on the window's blind." This poem is much more than fantastic. Congratulations, Andrea.
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Date: 1/2/2017 7:54:00 PM
So sensually beautiful, Andrea. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2017 6:17:00 PM
A 7 for your very beautiful, WINNING poem, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 1/2/2017 5:40:00 PM
Lovely to read this tale of two lovers from your collection Andrea, and to see it on the winner's list.
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:02:00 AM
Congrats again on this win with this awesome sonnet. You do them so well. Now I am up to Feb and time for a quick rest again. Flu has knocked the socks off but a good chance to catch up on comments. love phyl
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:28:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations with your beautiful essence of love win. Have yourself a good one. Love ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/21/2014 10:29:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:11:00 AM
That is simply great !! Congrats Andrea!!
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Date: 2/12/2014 8:12:00 PM
Very nice sonnet Andrea...winning wishes
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Date: 2/6/2014 8:40:00 AM
love this - so glad to see it was a winner
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Date: 2/3/2014 6:13:00 PM
awesome !! very impressive deary sista Andrea,,, Congratulation... :) enjoyed so much :) luve and peace :) Sk
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:27:00 AM
Loneliness, longing, love's pain, are all coiled together in this aching sonnet. A promise fell behind, somewhere. Bravo, poet!
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:57:00 AM
awesome sonnet, my friend
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:30:00 AM
Simply a very lovely write!
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Date: 2/2/2014 8:09:00 AM
A simple heart of love current passes through the wires of lovers' bodies. Beautiful poem, my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/2/2014 6:10:00 AM
hey, this is a nice one here.
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Date: 2/2/2014 4:44:00 AM
Andrea a very beautiful sonnet, love the image of the "arc"...David
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Date: 2/2/2014 3:39:00 AM
AWESOME
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Date: 2/2/2014 3:39:00 AM
awesome
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