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Essence of Time

Essence of Time




Time wheel for fortunates,
Passion on zeal vibrates !




Written October 12th, 2014
By Dr. Upma A. Sharma
For contest 'In the essence' by Nette onclaud

Copyright © Dr. Upma A. Sharma | Year Posted 2014

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Andrea Dietrich

October 12, 2014 at 7:43 PM

Nice one. For me, wheel and zeal , the internal rhymes, are a lot stronger than fortunates and vibrates.

October 12, 2014 at 1:09 PM

A fine entry in that contest. Best of luck my friend. Hard to rate such a short poem but giving this one a 7 for the zeal line alone!

October 12, 2014 at 11:29 AM

Well done dear...hugs Tim

October 12, 2014 at 11:18 AM

Love the rhyming Dr Sharma good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

October 12, 2014 at 11:00 AM

Time wheel for fortunates....ha..nice.

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