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Thank you to Vijay for this opportunity to write a collaboration with him.  It was easy to work with such a talented poet, so it was not a surprise that this poem was written in a few hours.  

Essence of Love Collaboration With Vijay Pandit

What is a man without the woman he loves, searching for his lady like lonesome doves. As his heart connects with the one he adores, his soul will yearn to meet upon any shores. When he comforts her mind with a loving grace and the love of his life begins to reign his space, nothing is ever the same, for she sets him aflame. As the rhythm of her heart resonates his name. He will whisper romantic musings - so sweet, as her elegance makes his heart skip a beat. He'll soothe her pain with his gentleman like charm. Shelter her in his arms from those that cause harm. He hears the sound of every breath she takes, greeting with a pleasant smile as she awakes. Promising a day filled with heavenly dreams, embracing longingly as her happiness gleams. Promising to deliver, receiving messages she sent, he'll bring her the moon if that's what she meant. Sacrificing his life, gallantly to conquer every climb, searching for what she wants till the end of time. Through the window of her soul he explores deep, banishing all demons that cause her to weep. Polishes her heart to prevent it from rust, making sure his diamond does not collect dust. A real man loves with his soul, not eyes of lust. Shows her loyalty and builds a loving trust. He can see their unborn children in her eyes, as they embrace he knows where their future lies. Silent One collaboration with Vijay Pandit. 21 December 2017
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Raven Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:40 AM
Hi Silent, this is such a beautiful collaboration by Vijay and yourself. Two very talented poets writing as one in a seamless write. Such wonderful lines that build up such beautiful imagery. The heart of love does sing in your song. An excellent write. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
Roper Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Love the poem, Silent One & Vijay, nicely done. Hugs eve
Devnath  Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Beautiful collaboration my dear friend. Beautiful words of heartfelt promising love expressed nicely. Thanks to both of you for sharing my dear lovely friends. Loved always, bl
Folker Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 11:59 PM
tres bien mon ami
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 10:21 AM
Merci beaucoup
Duet Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 11:23 PM
Very lovely. The wonderful words of love expressed in this poem show you both to be "knights in shining armor" that many women would love to have at her side.
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Thank you Carole, I believe every lady should have a knight and every knight a fair maiden..
Rankin Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:58 PM
Well done
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Thanks..
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 7:49 PM
Beautiful collab, SO and Vijay! This romantic gem expresses w/depth of clarity the true essence of real love. Kudos of POTD. Great teamwork by two talented poet masters. Love and smiles always.
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:48 AM
Thank you Freddie.. Hope it was up to the standards of the romantic warrior..
Ashley Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 6:21 PM
Silent One and Vijay, an outstanding collaboration. Congratulations for POTD honors with your deep meaningful write depicting the heart and soul of love. Beautifully expressed with lovely and intimate imagery. Well done you guys :) Warmest wishes always ~Susan
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Susan..
Downing  Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 1:38 PM
I knew this was going to be a potd :) congrats to you both! Hugs and smiles :)
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Kina..
Onclaud Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 1:38 PM
definitely a POTD for its charming imagery, SO and vijay... more!.. huggs
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Nette..
Y. Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Hi Silent, I'm just coming back to say congratulations to you both for getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-)Alexis
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Thank you Alexis..
Wanter Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:56 AM
Back to say congratulations!
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Thank you..
Gentile Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 9:18 AM
So well expressed and beautifully delivered, love can move mountains, Congratulations !!!
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Indeed it can, thank you Mike..
Pett Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations to both of you on POTD with this beautifully written poem, a joy to read. :))
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Thank you Roy..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 8:37 AM
Congratulations on potd honours :) Blessings xo
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Thank you Mo..
Andresen Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 8:28 AM
- A wonderful poem from you both !!! - Congratulations !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 11:59 AM
Thank you..
May Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 7:59 AM
Congrats to you both on POTD...Beautiful write
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:02 PM
Thank you Joseph..
Bateman Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Silent One and Vijay, Congratulations on the POTD honor!! "Essence of Love" is an extraordinary poem with some very meaningful and palpable messages in each of its seven stanzas. A definite pleasure to read, and to savor the passion, imagery, and emotion of each verse. Outstanding Work!! A FAVE TOO!! Merry Christmas, Gary
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:03 PM
Thank you Gary, glad you liked it.. Have a great Xmas..
Swartz Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations you two! What a deep and beautiful poem you guys created. Definitely deserves to be POTD!
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Thank you James..
Pandit Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 6:40 AM
Congrats Silent One on POTD!
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Congrats to you also Vijay, you had a big hand in this poem..
Gondolf Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 4:13 AM
SO and Vijay, this poem so beautifully describes a man’s love for his woman. Nicely done, it’s a fav for me. Congrats on POTD. John
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Thank you John..
Williams Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 3:46 AM
I knew this wonderful poem would get POTD, congratulations you two.So well deserved gentlemen...Maria
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Thank you Maria..
Downing  Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Simply beautiful! Picture and poem, two of the best poets on PS...
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Thank you Kina..
Williams Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 9:00 PM
Wow you two men, two of my favourite poets on PS, pulled this off so effortlessly in such a short space of time, unbelievable, and from your romantic words know how to keep a woman loved and secure too. Brilliant as always and Si and Vijay, definitely a fave....Maria
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Maria..
Hoffman Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 8:02 PM
You both brought out the essence of what true love is all about in this beautiful love poem…an excellent collaboration!~Che :)
One Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Che..
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