Esha's Haiku

Esha's Haiku

by Ayesha Karim


fork knife spoon

fruit salad bread bowl

soup entrée dessert
(Assume I am at a dinner or at IHOP)

Asking the server for the check.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lubasi Wina  Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 12:55 PM
Bold attempt on the haiku poem. It's really good
Oyewole Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 1:11 PM
Cute haiku... thanks for sharing it~A.O
Karim Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 10:47 PM
thank you Abdul
Banks Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 2:42 PM
One of my favorite subjects. Food! lol also, just liked the pithy nature of this. Thanks for sharing it!
Karim Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 9:00 PM
Thanks for the comment Mari.
Palmer Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 6:18 AM
nice write AYESHA, order servings for two on my way,lol
Karim Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 7:45 AM
Thanks Richard. I like dating brown skinned or Chocolate men. I appreciate you wanting to dine with me, that was nice and mad cool!
Palli Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Cute one!
Karim Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 9:01 PM
Thanks again.
Palli Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Cute one!
Karim Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 9:01 PM
Thank you Susan.
Andresen Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 10:40 AM
Ayesha, I like it a lot, well done ! - Wishing you an enjoyable and peaceful Christmas! // Anne-Lise :)
Karim Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Thanks Anne Lise.
Williams Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 1:11 PM
Ayesha well done...David
Karim Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 3:31 PM
Thank you David.
Beaufort Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Always nice to think about eating!
Karim Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 3:32 PM
Yes I know. I actually have lost a lot of weight recently but I used to go out to eat often so that's what this poem is about...
Beaufort Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Always nice to think about eating!
Karim Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 3:33 PM
Ha ha ha yes it is but this poem is about going out to eat and fine dining in a nice restaurant...
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