Esemerelda

There's an old witch who lives on a hill She eats ghouls and goblins for a thrill This mean old witch just loves to kill She would catch her prey near the town mill Next time you’re near the hill, you’ll feel a chill This is sample for my latest contest. I’m sure you all will write one scarier and I can't wait. Alexis Y. 10-9-17

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2017 3:31:00 PM

Oh, I already did mine without seeing yours first. I too was drawn to this type of theme. Love seeing your sample poem today.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/11/2017 9:55:00 PM

Scarey indeed, great Halloween write!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/11/2017 1:26:00 PM

Cool, scary write, Alexis. I think some kids are gonna be sleepless after reading this one. Lol! Nice Halloween touch. A dark, humorous poem written w/attitude and skill. Love and smiles always.

Silent One

Date: 10/9/2017 10:52:00 AM

Was almost a limerick! Great sample.. Keep away from those witches!

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/10/2017 7:12:00 PM

Hi Silent, Thank you so much for being the first and only one to comment on my example for my latest contest. I appreciate you very much:-) Alexis