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Escaping Thoughts

The mind is the prison Of a human being Trapped in a cell Called low self esteem This is where All the war begins Locked in a world Of mental sin Discrimination Isolation Lost Alone The battle of the mind is a fierce war zone Trying to escape thoughts in the mind But they seem to be stucked on rewind A prison of thoughts for eternity? When will I escape this mental slavery? But lord here I am I give my thoughts to you Cleanse me and make me free with my mind renewed Escaping thoughts Break away I want to be free A new mind With new thoughts A new life A new me

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Skat A

Date: 10/6/2015 1:28:00 PM

Danielle, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2015 3:23:00 AM

Danielle, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@