Jill Spagnola Poet Rhyme

Escape Hell

Escape Hell

                                         Hot as fu#!
                                      Broke as a joke
                                      Am I tuff enuff 
                       To overcome all this negative stuff?
                                 Responsibility galore
                               Yes, even if you’re poor
                                   Not poor in spirit
                                      Hear my plea
                      Don’t hand me logic based on fallacy
     Be dialectic with me so we may move on together transcendentally...

									


                                                                                                          Jill

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Robert Lindley June 27, 2016 at 10:33 AM I GRADE ON MESSAGE , HEART AND SPIRIT EXPRESSED IN A POEM. This one rated tops in all three with me. I say truth outranks all other considerations and equally matches LOVE.. And both are eternal products of divine Light.

Malcolm Dyer April 23, 2016 at 4:54 AM With that attitude you shall escape Jill Spagnola April 28, 2016 at 8:30 PM Yay! Malcolm I love your positivity :)peace, my friend ~ jill

Robert Lindley April 19, 2016 at 9:13 AM Have been poor , not wealthy now hope in the future , never giving up is the how.... Your fine poem strikes a deep note with me my friend. Short but timely, true and powerful--A7 Robert Lindley June 27, 2016 at 10:33 AM I GRADE ON MESSAGE , HEART AND SPIRIT EXPRESSED IN A POEM. This one rated tops in all three with me. I say truth outranks all other considerations and equally matches LOVE.. And both are eternal products of divine Light. Jill Spagnola April 28, 2016 at 8:28 PM Good evening Robert:) I am beat but I saw I had missed some comments on this poem...I do not ever want to be received as ungrateful, cause I am the total opposite of that! You are so generous with your grading!:)...peace, love, and light my friend

Vera Duggan April 3, 2016 at 2:17 AM Hi Jill, nicely written, broke, well we have been there trying to raise three kids etc. but our latter years are being very kind to us and we are far from poor, the thing is we needed it more when we had the kids and we don't need it so much now but as they say that is life, love the write thank you for sharing and take care ........Vera Jill Spagnola April 28, 2016 at 8:13 PM Great to hear from you Vera:) Thank you for sharing a piece of your life with me..'such is life', so true! Sweet thoughts I send to you and yours...peace, jill

Daniel Turner March 18, 2016 at 11:12 AM Perseverance is something each must learn simply to survive. At times we just simply put on blinders to stay focused. This is another excellent write from the inside. Peace my friend:) Jill Spagnola March 18, 2016 at 7:11 PM I appreciate you sharing, therefore, adding to my poetry experience..peace right back to you Daniel :),jill

Constance La France March 3, 2016 at 11:07 AM Jill, this is an excellent write and I am loving it 7 ~ Jill Spagnola March 3, 2016 at 11:02 PM Constance, you are too generous :)...peace, jill

Eve Roper February 28, 2016 at 10:34 PM Jill, your words are very profound. We are never poor in spirit, but it is hard to hold on until the very end with out grief a 7. Jill Spagnola March 3, 2016 at 10:59 PM Eve, thank you for sweet 7:) and 'getting me'! I know that pain always lies by the riverside ~ Creed....peace, jill