Escape Heartist

Trapped inside this dim-lit place 
Six-by-nine cell of inner space 
In a cage of ribs, locked away
My heart did time, held at bay 

But then it hatched a plan, all on its own
And slipped out through those bars of bone
Escape Heartist, like Houdini in chains
How the trick works, I cannot explain

Like that fugitive from Alcatraz of old
Covered in grease for a swim in the cold
My heart broke free, it’s on its way
It should arrive at your door today

Will you take it in, keep it safe and sound?
Or will you stomp it into the ground?
Or will you send it away by speaking true
Those four little words: I don't love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Nicole Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 12:25 PM
' How the trick works, I cannot explain. ' Breaking free of those emotions can be difficult, indeed. Sounds like you're longing to know the truth. I can understand that. I feel your heart, Brian. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Mcclain Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 8:26 AM
Hi Brandy, Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem! My best to you too! -Brian
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 11:55 PM
Wow. Best one o think I saw tonight. A fave
Mcclain Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 4:33 AM
Hi, Andrea! Thank you so much, that's so kind of you! I do believe seeing your message this morning has preemptively made my day!
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