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Escape Boundary

Written: February 29, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Under azure sky, typhoon winds whirl. Crafting an impressive exhibition of: b u t t e b u t t e r f l i e s f l i e s Whirling in an endless circle. Motion as the victorious struggle unfolds. crafting tunes from their swirling vitality. As the sun shines, aesthetically pleasing earth. Such vibrant hues, a chromatic surreal display  surreal Our land was filled loveliness was redeemed, hostage explicitly crafted for concealment surreal evil force dwells in We shall prevail on them So that grace guise rise free

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Date: 3/4/2024 4:38:00 AM
Very well written what a lovely poem adored reading your work.
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Date: 3/2/2024 8:09:00 AM
I like how you structured your poem and you get that surreal feeling from it.. Some lovely lines here expressing how you feel and creating imagery..
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Date: 3/1/2024 11:44:00 AM
Nice poem and butterfly illustration. Quite artistic. Your poems are always nice.
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Date: 3/1/2024 1:17:00 AM
My, this took my breath away, I especially loved how you presented 'Butterflies' in a cross form, rising from the evil. This is beautiful.
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Date: 2/29/2024 5:07:00 PM
the structure of your poem is beautifully crafted, dear Sotto. The intricacy of your poem underscored your message -- the surreal chromatic display of butterflies is symbolic of the beauty/grace overcoming surreal evil forces. I assume you wrote this poem for the 'surreal' contest. If so, it's a magnificent entry. It resonated with me at a deep level that I'm unable to adequately explain. your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 2/29/2024 4:12:00 PM
SP, seems what's hidden gets revealed and we see it all in this poem so that it can be dealt with constructively. That's a good message if I understand what you are saying. Your work is complex. If I interpreted it incorrectly, please let me know.
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