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Entry:  "Couplet Poetry" Contest  
Sponsored by:  Sotto Poet
May 8, 2023
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Escape

One more time and out the door I could not ever ask for more I think we knew it was a crime But we just had so little time I heard a crash and then a shout And soon we labored soaked in doubt The rope was tight but now went slack And so there was no turning back And now our fervor turned to fear As running guards were coming near We thought that we could make a run But now we know we’re really done So freedom is a fleeting fire Escape is an enticing liar Now time is added to our stay It’s time to plan another day
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Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 11:03 AM
- Great written, Andy ... congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
Chunn Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 3:56 PM
Thank you....and contrats to you for a 1st place....nice poem, well done!
Y. Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 10:46 PM
Hi Andy, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a good evening;-) Alexis
Chunn Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Thank you Alexis....and congrats on your 1st place.....nicely done!
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