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Escapade Bouquet

Let's shake loose grown-up do's, go out and play. My love, let's turn our somber needs to young. This sunny day's our escapade bouquet. Let's play to stay life's cheer upon our gray. This day's high lovely clouds are fluffy strung. Let's shake loose grown-up do's, go out and play. We two can scheme as leafy branches sway or race-eat ice cream using just the tongue. This sunny day's our escapade bouquet. We'll frolic in fun streams with splash-slapped sprays. Hummed melodies from nature will be sung. Let's shake loose grown-up do's, go out and play. Our playfulness we must not let decay. We'll chase the day as giggles fill our lungs. This sunny day's our escapade bouquet. We'll lay on grass and let our fancies stray. Adulthood tossed, our spirits will be sprung. Let's shake loose grown-up do's, go out and play. This sunny day's our escapade bouquet. ... CayCay 1/19/19

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Date: 4/18/2019 8:55:00 AM
Wow, villanelle! It's been so long since I met you) Nicely done, CayCay. Oh, I see the silver! Please accept my late congratulations.
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Date: 2/11/2019 11:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, CayCay. Well done.
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Date: 2/3/2019 11:10:00 PM
Congrats Caycay on your win.
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Date: 1/26/2019 7:32:00 PM
Hurrah, Caycay!!! SEcond place. Outstanding. You truly captured joy with this villanelle! Congratulations.
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Date: 1/26/2019 6:32:00 PM
Congratulations for your win CayCay :)
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Date: 1/26/2019 5:44:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, CayCay! DELIGHTFUL! Janice
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Date: 1/26/2019 2:43:00 PM
Wonderful & playful - congrats CayCay
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Date: 1/26/2019 2:36:00 PM
What a fun, exciting and clever Villanelle. Congrats, Cay Cay!
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Date: 1/21/2019 10:33:00 AM
What a wonderful, playful day you describe, CayCay! Thanks for letting your readers tag along and enjoy the fun. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2019 2:00:00 AM
This poem lifted my spirits CayCay. I loved this wonderfully creative Villanelle. I have never been able to write even one. I am sure to see this on the winner's list my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/20/2019 1:44:00 PM
I will send you a hotmail soon!! where is the purple poem? I know you missed the contest but didn't you post it?
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Date: 1/20/2019 12:33:00 PM
Hi Cay Cay, another wonderful write from your pen. One feels such joy when reading this wonderful Villanelle. The images come through, painted with such fun-filled colours. This is not an easy form to do. You have done it really well. All the best in the contest. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/19/2019 8:32:00 PM
Tough form done very well, best wishes...
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/20/2019 1:55:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie. Hugs ... CayCay
Date: 1/19/2019 7:03:00 PM
Your words are SO delightful here, Caycay. I believe Nina will find this utterly charming!
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Date: 1/19/2019 8:07:00 AM
A very good Villanelle, a form that can be difficult, but you did very well..
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/19/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thank you SO, I just hope I got the iambic pentameter right. Appreciate your feedback. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 1/19/2019 4:45:00 AM
Provoking heart and mind to a youthful embrace! Superb concept and writing dearest CayCay!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/19/2019 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, my dear friend. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 1/19/2019 1:28:00 AM
Amen to that ! Too much adult in too many of us, I suppose. Nicely expressed, CC.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 1/19/2019 8:30:00 AM
It's good to have your comments. Thank you ... CayCay

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