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"Escalating the Muse" Written on the body passive complacence stretches sharp ink etched pain in the soul then real beauty from the Book of Truth, a page moored in transparent skin ; Black, tattooed ceremonially on the tongue speaks diaphonous Freedom Written on the body stretches stories ripped and tall, they are torn, a small revolution amongst the crowds of alphabet coding in a tight sealed tin akin to a Can of Campbell’s Soup Escalates the Muse Written in the body a work of art, beautiful, pure and stubborn centred, dirt muddied yet, clean stripped, balanced for the Laymen betwixt Papillon folded Wings, en stasis, looks through the Chrysalis towards the you in gilded story the Higher requires analyses, there She thinks, writes the Muse tattooed on the tongue Words projecting Muse to Escalation (LadyLabyrinth/2019) llb/gvlm for my daughter, Georgia ; "LUX VITAE" "Brûle-moi" / Jean-Louis Murat https://youtu.be/M6l_sQQ8lS0 "Distractions" / Zero 7 https://youtu.be/6ng6IKp8uao "What New York Couples Fight About" / Morcheeba https://youtu.be/RUE0J2UvThM "Golden Years" / Bowie https://youtu.be/JUuRGRcY9O0 Battement de coeur dans ; Battement de coeur vers l'extérieur

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Robert Lindley

Date: 11/10/2019 8:37:00 PM

My friend, there is a quality in your poems show you write on a plane cast into the golden heavens. Such word-smithing awes me to my poor and humble poetic bones! And in that realm, you seems to easily control immense depths of power as well. A gem , a beauty, and a great fav too...

Robert Lindley
Date: 11/11/2019 7:50:00 AM

My friend I can only speak that which my poetic heart feels when reading your poetry. Methinks you underestimate its impact upon lovers of true poetry that has depths, wisdom and message..

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/10/2019 11:34:00 PM

now now Lindley, your writing is "Divine"; that is way too kind and beautiful a comment to throw my way. My writing pales in comparison to your superior thoughts and words. Thank you for your kind-hearted words. Leanne x

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/10/2019 3:29:00 AM

Your muse is even more theatrical than my muse! " Written on the body stretches stories ripped and tall, they are torn, a small revolution amongst the crowds of alphabet coding in a tight sealed tin akin to a Can of Campbell’s Soup" In full force you march toward an inner truth.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/10/2019 5:17:00 PM

"Truth" is surely the Agenda worth pursuing in all creative works, including life. Thank you Mme K.

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/10/2019 2:06:00 AM

The last stanza is really graphic...I like it...

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/10/2019 5:18:00 PM

Equates with Ascension. Spiritual awakening, transformation. Thank you Arturo.

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 11/9/2019 10:15:00 PM

"Midway upon the journey of our life I found myself within a forest dark, For the straightforward pathway had been lost."

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 11/9/2019 10:12:00 PM

The Divine Comedy / Dante Alighieri

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/9/2019 10:14:00 PM

http://www.everypoet.com/archive/poetry/dante/dante_contents.htm

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/9/2019 8:55:00 PM

the voices that whisper in our minds are formed by the minutes lived and are painted with the knowledge that renders our understanding of the color of sanity so the world can find the path of our muse as it uses words to describe the journey...the reader can make their own conclusions... my first thought after reading... my true friend

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/9/2019 8:59:00 PM

Writing, after all, is the Higher Self speaking words to us, surely? One should always listen to that higher power that exists in prisms of Light and Dark within all of us. Always, despite the white noise emanating from the maddening crowd. "IT" leads the way, always. Herr Parker, as per past parlez, your steadfast friend, Leanne.

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 11/9/2019 3:36:00 PM

FRENCH. https://youtu.be/r7tL64edcIg

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/9/2019 3:37:00 PM

ENGLISH. https://youtu.be/T8fgmfM2zeQ

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 11/9/2019 2:30:00 PM

Everyone is on their own journey towards discovering their Muse, with their own words, thoughts and deeds ... in their own way.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/9/2019 2:30:00 PM

STILL CORNERS. https://youtu.be/uKBWxvN0VMc

Ts Poetry

Date: 11/9/2019 6:00:00 AM

Words of gold gifted soul to soul, written in indelible ink. Marking passage and passion thru time and continuum. Your words bleed beauty enriched with wisdom and truth.

Ts Poetry
Date: 11/9/2019 9:40:00 PM

I was teasing...thanks L have a nice holiday

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/9/2019 8:38:00 PM

I am standing with people, I am walking with them, friend. It is not for me to lead. People have to follow their own hearts and journeys, write and live their own stories - as it has already been set for them. Dante's story is well worth the read. Your friend, Leanne.x

Ts Poetry
Date: 11/9/2019 5:34:00 PM

I believe we've already been there so lead the way Beatrice

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/9/2019 4:18:00 PM

"The path to paradise begins in hell"...

Ts Poetry
Date: 11/9/2019 2:44:00 PM

That voice is amazing, I'll have to listen to the whole song when I'm home from work. I don't think the whole break room wants to hear but who knows lol

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/9/2019 2:34:00 PM

https://youtu.be/nn-2AYI3abI

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/9/2019 2:33:00 PM

Thank you TS. Everyone is a gift here, and delivers a gift to the reader - whatever their gifts or agenda. Some remain hidden, but I see them. Regarding, Today's Observer.

Ts Poetry
Date: 11/9/2019 7:38:00 AM

https://youtu.be/SiO_7LhPZFM

Ts Poetry
Date: 11/9/2019 6:07:00 AM

https://youtu.be/m_dvakUl9wA