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Erupting Clouds

erupting clouds brown soil erupts with till. more or less still, with seed. growing pains burst ground, cosseted by umbrella stem. seeds of dandelion spread, waving kisses as they spin. sunflower magnifies in sky… till seed stem weed sky tired birds sigh o’er them. garter snake slithers, amidst anxious pansies and elephant ears. gray clouds e x p l…………….o d……………………..e xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxx

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Date: 2/26/2017 11:10:00 PM
Oh.... YES! Has been an easy winter, but your poem here makes me want some spring and summer, Kim! Well done, like most people don't want their meat on the grill. ; )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2017 7:32:00 AM
We might as well can on to Spring and Summer...lol! :)
Date: 2/26/2017 9:03:00 AM
Very cool and fun to read.:0)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thank you, Richard!:)
Date: 2/25/2017 9:01:00 PM
Great imagery in your clever creation Kim! Enjoyed!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2017 9:02:00 PM
Thanks so much!

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