'erratic'

erratic kisses 
spreads tenderness to my core
unruly response

©141107082013

kisslovepassionsenryu

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Poet Destroyer A

August 31, 2013 at 9:27 AM

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Karl Marszalowicz

August 31, 2013 at 3:50 AM

the unruly responses are the best but do you write longer works? I find the longer the poem the deeper the you go.

Kash Poet

August 11, 2013 at 1:41 PM

Good one :))

Honestly J.T.

August 10, 2013 at 10:47 PM

Nicely done. Kisses that make you feel warm and toasty

Sean L Sanders

August 9, 2013 at 10:38 AM

Okay a little light poetry hahaha you killed it excellent poetry poet

Delysia Hendricks

August 8, 2013 at 5:45 PM

Ooh-la-la, homegirl. Talk about erotic - sorry, erratic. A nice hottie, Wilma. Hey, beautiful new pic. I like, very much. Licia :-)

Jack Ellison

August 8, 2013 at 6:59 AM

Sounds pretty wild to me... yummy! Big warm hugs, Jack xoxox

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2013 at 2:22 PM

this is sexy! I love that phrase, "unruly" response!!

Pace Ink-U-Script

August 7, 2013 at 9:51 AM

Yes yes yes..."Unruly response" is powerful in this senyru..I love it..awesome imagery...was waiting on your to post another poem.. :) hugs beautiful.

Russell Sivey

August 7, 2013 at 9:14 AM

Wow this is so very masterfully done my friend! I really loved reading this tremendously awesome poem here this morning! What a delightful piece, quite the amazing poem, Great Work!!