...Errant Acorns Splash

errant acorns splash 
dry leaf twirls and swirls along
dandelion seeds
dance whispering water tense
falls giggles gleefully by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Orozco Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 6:27 PM
Beautiful image here! - jeremiah
Anish Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 4:54 PM
Pretty images of nature here. I haven't seen acorns in a long time. Would like to again. Keep it up! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Shango Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 7:33 PM
Why do I think of children at play ... a very happy poem indeed. Brilliantly done.
Strand Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 12:35 AM
Thank you for your blog comments today Debbie.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 4:53 PM
There is so much cheer in this delightful poem! Nice one, Debbie! :)
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