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Erosion of Trust

"Betrayal begins with trust" - Quote by Phish Here's the story of a married couple... They had the world on a string, The blueprint to erect A lasting foundation of togetherness. They forged a covenant... To comfortably repose forever On the bed of dreams The love they shared was As solid as granite, as was Their unwavering faith in one another. Their relationship flourished. It was firmly rooted to the ground Like an Egyptian pyramid. A sinewy bond that could never be Severed, or so it seemed. At the first sign of trouble, A third party waiting in the wings Wiggles herself through a crack Between the two lovers; Two becomes a crowd, Betrayal gradually erodes trust. A once steadfast union Crumbles like Jenga blocks. Their love withers on the vine; Infidelity, the coup de grace. Writing Challenge - B Quotes - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Date written: 05/22/2023

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Date: 5/27/2023 9:07:00 AM
Edward, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/28/2023 5:32:00 PM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my top placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Date: 5/26/2023 4:46:00 AM
We'll done Edward, the cementing line..."a third party waiting in the wings wiggles herself through a crack"...excellent visual
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/26/2023 10:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, John:-)
Date: 5/25/2023 10:49:00 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved first-place contest win. Edward, blessings dear friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/26/2023 10:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, Lasaad:-)
Date: 5/25/2023 9:35:00 AM
Betrayal starts to lose trust in hearts, It happens everywhere in world. Congrats on win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/26/2023 10:19:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jay:-)
Date: 5/23/2023 5:50:00 AM
The story you conveyed is true to this world. Happens so frequently. Sad how relationships suddenly turn for the worse.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/23/2023 7:12:00 AM
Pretty sad indeed, Vijay! Thanks for dropping by, as usual:-)

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