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Erosion of Time

Time melting away,
Dissolving in a slow fade;
Never found again.





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Inspired from 'Explosion' 
By Salvador Dali

www.s-kite-art.com/dali/dali04.html

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/9/2009 1:02:00 PM So true that we can't regain lost minutes, lost time. That's why it's important to make the most of every day. (I'll have to check out Dali's painting.) Great poem, Raul! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Danielle Moreno Date: 4/1/2009 6:15:00 PM Great work..............Danielle Login to Reply

Steve Edmonds Date: 3/29/2009 10:04:00 AM Great representaion of the painting, your work never lets me down. Login to Reply

Date: 3/29/2009 4:50:00 AM So much truth in your powerful statement. Much for the reader to think about in just three lines. Good job! Karen Login to Reply

Chris Goombi Date: 3/28/2009 11:47:00 PM Great description of a excellent painting, nice rendition in words. Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 3/28/2009 3:34:00 AM Raul this is a very well written and profound Senryu that you have penned - Great to read you again - God Bless, MJ Login to Reply

Elizabeth Neal Date: 3/27/2009 10:04:00 PM A nice Ekphrasis-senryu Raul, you are on a lovley roll. You drop poems like crazy. Keep them coming. I really enjoy your entertaining reads, you never let down. Love Elizabeth Login to Reply

Daniel Neal Date: 3/27/2009 3:13:00 AM Erosion it is, time is lost forever, clever way of grasping it. DN Login to Reply

Tyler Martin Date: 3/27/2009 2:56:00 AM Nice representaion of the painting. Great muse you chose. Tyler Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 3/27/2009 1:02:00 AM Great ekphrasis Raul/Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments Login to Reply

Ronald Bingham Date: 3/26/2009 7:19:00 PM Point well made, Blessings my friend, Ron Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/26/2009 7:19:00 PM Excellent description of a facinating piece of art! ~ Well done! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Tyesha Ehigiator Date: 3/26/2009 6:00:00 PM We can't turn back yesterday once it is gone. that is why we have to make the best of today...Powerful creation here, Awesome Write~GB Always, Tyesha Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 3/26/2009 4:40:00 PM Raul, this is so strange I was just looking at his work online about a half hour ago thinking of writing something, and here you did! Is he not fascinating and so inspiring? Excellent write! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/26/2009 4:05:00 PM so true we can't turn back time once it melted away,i like how you described it,a lot-cheers Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 3/26/2009 3:48:00 PM Love this Raul....time is such a precious commodity..this write is so profound. BG Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 3/26/2009 3:48:00 PM Love this Raul....time is such a precious commodity..this write is so profound. BG Login to Reply

Frank F. Atanacio Date: 3/26/2009 1:40:00 PM Time-- just like the Ice-caps slow fade-- perfect write Login to Reply

John Weber Date: 3/26/2009 1:31:00 PM The flimsy construct of time only appears fluid when unobserved. Perhaps, we make mechanical time real with our belief in following such patterns? Great progression of Dali's theme, Raul! Warm regards, John. Login to Reply