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Erosion (Haiku)

Gullies scar brown earth
     Hurricanes bring erosion
          Of both soil and lives

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Valerie Staton

January 27, 2019 at 7:04 AM

Very well written!

Pat Adams

January 18, 2019 at 6:35 PM

Yes! A tribute to the form.......pat

Frances Schiavina

December 26, 2018 at 9:21 AM

Well done!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

January 15, 2015 at 7:08 AM

Humm!! okay...hurricanes soil lives...Hugs! >>>>rajat

Faye Gibson

August 12, 2014 at 11:49 AM

Congratulations, Carolyn; wonderful haiku.

Suzanne Delaney

August 9, 2014 at 3:48 PM

Congratulations, Carolyn: How beautifully you have connected the effects of nature on man. Adding this to my favs, SuZ

Casarah Nance

August 9, 2014 at 12:52 PM

wow powerful! grats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 11:36 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

August 8, 2014 at 11:00 AM

Yes, Carolyn, this is a 'double' erosion. Hopefully we won't have too many of those in life. Congrats on your fine win. Love and peace. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 8, 2014 at 6:33 AM

lovely haiku Carolyn ! So true,, congrats on big win !

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 12:56 AM

Congratulations on the fine win, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2014 at 11:52 PM

Hi, Carolyn. Good to see you on the winners' list. And congratulations.

Harry Horsman

December 8, 2012 at 3:23 PM

love this little gem, just want you to know, i'm thinking about you, Carolyn, have a nice festive season...

Kash Poet

May 5, 2011 at 4:54 AM

Wonderful Haiku here Carolyn.Are you better now?-kash

Wilma Neels

October 16, 2010 at 1:18 PM

Carolyn, what an awesome haiku you got here. Hope you are enjoying your football weekend my friend. Had a blast with my niece btw ;) love Wilma

Timothy Brumley

August 1, 2010 at 3:54 PM

Yes, it is God's way.

Laura Mckenzie

April 10, 2010 at 5:16 PM

Carolyn~ Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Katherine Stella

April 10, 2010 at 7:10 AM

so sad but true carolyn so much said in such few lines congrats on being featured this week also thanks a million for your countless support to all here at P.S. keep up the great work