Erosion

errors and excuses
repeated every day
over and over again
second place~ a hard space to fill
in tiny drops I die
over and over again
never to heal ~  the erosion of my soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 3:12 AM
It is a nice poem on the theme of erosion. enjoyed the acrostic of erosion of soul
Mills Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 10:33 PM
hmm. interesting view
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