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Erosion (Haiku)

Gullies scar brown earth
     Hurricanes bring erosion
          Of both soil and lives

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/27/2019 7:04:00 AM

Very well written!

Pat Adams

Date: 1/18/2019 6:35:00 PM

Yes! A tribute to the form.......pat

Frances Schiavina

Date: 12/26/2018 9:21:00 AM

Well done!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/15/2015 7:08:00 AM

Humm!! okay...hurricanes soil lives...Hugs! >>>>rajat

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/12/2014 11:49:00 AM

Congratulations, Carolyn; wonderful haiku.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/9/2014 3:48:00 PM

Congratulations, Carolyn: How beautifully you have connected the effects of nature on man. Adding this to my favs, SuZ

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 12:52:00 PM

wow powerful! grats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:36:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/8/2014 11:00:00 AM

Yes, Carolyn, this is a 'double' erosion. Hopefully we won't have too many of those in life. Congrats on your fine win. Love and peace. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/8/2014 6:33:00 AM

lovely haiku Carolyn ! So true,, congrats on big win !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 12:56:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2014 11:52:00 PM

Hi, Carolyn. Good to see you on the winners' list. And congratulations.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/8/2012 3:23:00 PM

love this little gem, just want you to know, i'm thinking about you, Carolyn, have a nice festive season...

Kash Poet

Date: 5/5/2011 4:54:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku here Carolyn.Are you better now?-kash

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/16/2010 1:18:00 PM

Carolyn, what an awesome haiku you got here. Hope you are enjoying your football weekend my friend. Had a blast with my niece btw ;) love Wilma

Timothy Brumley

Date: 8/1/2010 3:54:00 PM

Yes, it is God's way.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/10/2010 5:16:00 PM

Carolyn~ Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Katherine Stella

Date: 4/10/2010 7:10:00 AM

so sad but true carolyn so much said in such few lines congrats on being featured this week also thanks a million for your countless support to all here at P.S. keep up the great work