Ernestine and the Wolverine

Ernestine and her friends sweet sixteen
Jean   Irene   Josephine   and Pauline

Dolled up in glamorous aubergine velveteen
Dreamt of being harvest queens on Halloween

Living it up Eugene drove their limousine 
Directly to the drive-in theater widescreen

And there He was    larger than life    The Wolverine
With his deep hypnotic eyes of aquamarine

Twists and turns unforeseen in out and in between
For something not much bigger than a magic bean

Escaped the guillotine somewhere in the Philippine  
Plenty of action all for a figurine of Byzantine

Hearts pitter patter    larger than life    The Wolverine
With the dreamiest hypnotic eyes of aquamarine

Back home Ernestine tossed her poster of Steve McQueen
The pristine one torn last week from a hip teen magazine

There was a new heartthrob on the scene
Sweeter than a bowl of ice scream topped with praline

Sitting to write her love letter to The Wolverine
Seal it with a kiss colour and scent of tangerine



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on March 25, 2018 for contest LOVE LETTER II sponsored by VIV WIGLEY  -  RANKED 5TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcguire Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 11:55 PM
I have to come clean, You know what I mean? This poem is one of the best I've seen.
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July 12, 2018 at 12:27 AM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
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April 16, 2018 at 12:42 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Line - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
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April 16, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Gregory.
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April 10, 2018 at 2:44 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Line with this entertaining piece! : )
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April 10, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thank you , Connie, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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April 9, 2018 at 10:36 PM
I truly like this! Congratulations on your win with this delightful monorhyme! Clever.
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April 10, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
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April 9, 2018 at 6:16 AM
I love this entrancing monorhyme! Great imagery! Congratulations, dear Line, on your win with this superb piece! Hugs. Pandita
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April 9, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thanks, Pandita, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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April 9, 2018 at 12:51 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win with a beautiful monorhyme.
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April 9, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated.
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April 8, 2018 at 11:40 PM
Congratulations Line!
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April 9, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Thanks, Rob. Much appreciated.
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April 8, 2018 at 9:41 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line! Hugs Eve ~`*
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April 8, 2018 at 10:32 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Fabulous monorhyme Line, :-) many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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April 8, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Thank you, Jan. Most appreciated.
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