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Eris, Paris and the Golden Apple

Too bright for sight, This tunnel of light A temple of Mind In a life of Night A ghost of Soul, Too old to know Life is Death is Life again, (Oh, they told me so!) *More experimental than anything

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/26/2013 6:14:00 PM
yes experimental.
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Date: 8/27/2013 6:21:00 AM
Thanks for the reaffirmation.
Date: 8/26/2013 4:28:00 PM
Provocative maybe I would put the last line in parenthesis or maybe a dash before it...just a thought....mythological reference always intrigues me..V
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Date: 8/26/2013 5:05:00 PM
Excellent suggestion, Victoria! I will do just that! Thanks for the feedback; glad you liked it :)
Date: 8/26/2013 1:57:00 PM
Yes, the winter brings the temporary death of the beautiful summer plants but come spring they rise again..Enjoyed reading your creative work...Thanks for the visits to my work..I appreciate you visits there..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2013 2:04:00 PM
Thank you for visiting my little poetic sanctuary in the corner of the universe also, Sara. I enjoyed reading your work as well :)
Date: 8/26/2013 1:44:00 PM
I can't seem to soupmail you. Feel free to mail me. :)
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