Eric and Dylan

I speak daggers
That run deeper
Into the psyche
Than the insult
Fresh off the
Tongue of the
Twisted twelve-year old
Huffing glue behind
Your neighborhood CVS
An insult that cuts 
Deeper than any
Blow dealt
Out by Daddy Whiskey-on-his-Breath
Or Uncle Candy-Nose
Insult that adds spark 
To black powder propelling
Lead hate from
The chamber
And into the Student Council
President
And the Homecoming Queen
An insult that sprays
Hate like a fire hose
Trying to save little Jimmy 
On the top floor of a burning
House ready to collapse around
His frail ten-year-old skeleton
An insult is not
A word
But a scar tattooed
On the forehead to those
It was dealt
Because perception
Can become reality
ready to rip silent
but deadly truths
that test willpower 
and deadly seduction
by word of mouth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mason Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Not sure I understand the significance of the title, but your words of Truth are powerful in this writing Anthony. Its a very well-deserved piece to be a feature here at the Soup this week! Congratulations!!
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March 27, 2009 at 11:48 PM
Wow such a powerful write speaking out about the harsh reality of life these days. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
Adeite Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 3:05 AM
great and glorious is thy pen. this piece is awesome. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... Adeleke
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March 26, 2009 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations Anthony on your reality poem "Eric And Dylan" being featured. Vince
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March 25, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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March 23, 2009 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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