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Eres Tan Hermosa

espiritu afin huyo
sin razon
embriagantes
nubes grises
bailado y entregado
el odor della lluvia
colgado alli como
un huerfano
los agujeros
negros
en el cielo
mortal
rieron en la cara
abierta un cielo
eres tan hermosa

allusioni do not know?

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Francis Osho

July 27, 2016 at 2:20 AM

i meant ei odor. the smell of rain hung there like an orphan. della was intentional. eventually i think it will be a mix of engles apanish italian i mean d romantic languages with abstract sketches. it will b sketchetry.my first buk of sketchetry is in print. will let u know wen it comes out

John Hamilton

July 27, 2016 at 8:24 AM

I think it is nice if your reader knows the 3 languages, but mixing them together will be confusing for those who don't know italian they will just think you are not educated and can't spell correctly. Even in English it's hard to take the author seriously if there are serious spelling mistakes.

John Hamilton

July 26, 2016 at 10:42 PM

Porque escribas en espanol cuando el sitio esta en ingles? Creo que quieres decir al fin huyo. El olor de la lluvia. contraccion della es italiano. Buen intento, siga adelante!

Francis Osho

July 27, 2016 at 2:16 AM

hi john. i ve seen ppl write in hindi here. sorry if i offended you.see spanish is my 5th lang.i am just translating my own poems frm english so dat i cn learn d lang then start writing fluently without even translating n i like d spanish trans . it sounds better dan engles. ty, keep in touch

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