Ere the Dawn

Tremble my soul
   Ere the dawn awakens

Laid down immutably stressed
   Risen up unshackled, lustrous and blessed

Daily miracles performed above
   Bind us here on Earth with Eternal Love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 1:42 PM
a perfect title for a lovely write!
B. Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:46 PM
"A touching and heartfelt couplet, my friend.. A pleasurable reading!! Really enjoyed it. Blessings to you.."
Waters Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:34 PM
indeed! Sleep is still a mystery I ponder much. makes our days worth living. Freshly put.
Michael Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 4:45 PM
If it wasn't for the many miracles that happen each day mankind would have preferred death than live in despair..Nice write Gershon...All the best my friend
Canerdy Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Very moving, Gershon. Janice
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Janice! :) gw
Kiser Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Food for thought, thanks.
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Glad you thought so, and thank you for your visit!! :) gw
Man Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Each line powerful.. I got the idea of laying down burdened but awaken refreshed and rising full of resolve and solution!
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:42 PM
That's it, L.M! Appreciate your visit! ~ Gershon
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Gorgeous. xomo
Wolf Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:41 PM
Appreciated, Mo.
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