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Ere the Dawn

Tremble my soul Ere the dawn awakens Laid down immutably stressed Risen up unshackled, lustrous and blessed Daily miracles performed above Bind us here on Earth with Eternal Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/12/2018 1:42:00 PM
a perfect title for a lovely write!
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:46:00 PM
"A touching and heartfelt couplet, my friend.. A pleasurable reading!! Really enjoyed it. Blessings to you.."
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:34:00 PM
indeed! Sleep is still a mystery I ponder much. makes our days worth living. Freshly put.
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Date: 7/9/2018 4:45:00 PM
If it wasn't for the many miracles that happen each day mankind would have preferred death than live in despair..Nice write Gershon...All the best my friend
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Date: 7/9/2018 12:56:00 PM
Food for thought, thanks.
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:43:00 PM
Glad you thought so, and thank you for your visit!! :) gw
Date: 7/9/2018 12:56:00 PM
Very moving, Gershon. Janice
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Janice! :) gw
Date: 7/9/2018 8:53:00 AM
Each line powerful.. I got the idea of laying down burdened but awaken refreshed and rising full of resolve and solution!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2018 1:42:00 PM
That's it, L.M! Appreciate your visit! ~ Gershon
Date: 7/9/2018 7:02:00 AM
Gorgeous. xomo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2018 1:41:00 PM
Appreciated, Mo.

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