Ere I Freeze

Alone I walked and unspoken I tried,
Unseen I searched and unknown was I hoped.
O Lord! My Lord! Something's there in this road.
Will not you answer what is this deep doubt?
The road's windy and rainy, do tell me,
Lest my dim heart would ever be gloomy.

Please O please, send me "A breeze" so to soothe.
If you have some flowers, I won't mind it, 
Or for some songs, I believe a small bird.
No more rain but Stars to look at - instead.
Water's soft yet sometimes it wears a Stone.
The beauty's simple, simple makes me mourn.

I dare not look at the so breezy breeze.
Lord it's never late : help me out ere I freeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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November 18, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Congrats on your win, Isor.
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November 19, 2017 at 4:43 AM
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October 30, 2017 at 8:04 AM
A lovely write Isor.
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October 30, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Enormous thank you
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October 29, 2017 at 4:10 PM
Congrats Isor! Lovely theme!
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October 30, 2017 at 6:05 AM
Thank I never expected
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October 29, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in this contest!
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October 30, 2017 at 6:05 AM
Oh really ! Never believed
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