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Eraser

Mom, you were my eraser For a long long time you see For my life you were a pacer You thought you protected me But I couldn't learn mom Not with you around And I'm waiting for the day I'm gone The church bells will continually sound Because I couldn't control the sweeping away The constant forgetting of what occurred So stop erasing mom, today Or this will be my final word I don't want to forget it, not anymore And I leave you with a choice My life is the paper in which you tore And my world was controlled by your voice So stop erasing, remembering is good! It's what makes us who we are And if you continue you've taught me to, Forget you in my life so far

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2010 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Paula's contest Jen. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2010 12:11:00 PM
congratulations to you, Jen. LUv, andrea
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:57:00 PM
congrats on the win as well, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:13:00 PM
Congrats on the win
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Date: 6/4/2010 4:34:00 PM
Congratulations. lSad but well said. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/4/2010 3:38:00 PM
Congrats Jen on your HM in the Eraser contest with this awesome write... now enjoy a speical honor given to u... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/4/2010 12:35:00 PM
I know.I understand. loving my mom & hating her attitude.Great job :) and this goes to my Favs
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