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Every Lie

Every lie taints the things you've said; while anxiety starts to flood. And from happiness, truths are bled, until all that is left is pain. It feels like you opened a vein, and drowned my dreams in pools of blood. There's little chance of finding bliss, Hope doesn't come with a guarantee. Yet it lingers like a moist kiss; or a promise left unfulfilled. Once you lose trust, you can't rebuild: some dreams were never meant to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/24/2018 2:33:00 PM
Hello Emile, Congrats on your win. Your poem has pain. A great poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/24/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile
Date: 5/11/2018 5:49:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 5/11/2018 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate all your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/11/2018 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Emile :)
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Date: 5/11/2018 2:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/11/2018 12:59:00 PM
oooh love the pic! I love the thorn pricks, great words there! Perfect rhythm and rhyme and great metaphors :) Thank you and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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Date: 5/11/2018 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Laura, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/6/2018 9:37:00 AM
This deeply reaches the reader, Emile. Well expressed! :)
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Date: 5/6/2018 11:36:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/6/2018 9:15:00 AM
A lovely and emotive write, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 5/6/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate all your support my friend, Emile.

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