Er Hello

ER … HELLO

Hello
How do you do
Do you come here often
I come nearly every day
You know

Sorry
You are quite right
To look at me aghast
That was a corny chat-up line
I used

You see
I get tongue-tied
When I meet someone new
Who is as beautiful as you
And then ..

Oh dear
I’ve dug a hole
And I can’t seem to stop
It’s getting deeper all the time
I’ll go

What’s that
Don’t go you say
You liked my chat-up line
You think we might get on quite well
Oh wow

15th April 2023
Traditional Cinquain Poetry contest
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Kendrick Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara Reply
Kauffman Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 12:30 PM
So full of human emotions and delight - one heart reaching out to another and finding a kindred soul! I really like the conversation style of the poem - the stream of consciousness. Congratulations on your win. Blessings to you Bryn!
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 4:28 PM
this is a really fun read. Congrats on your win.
Fowler Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 12:01 PM
A lovely series ... well done, Bryn :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 6:17 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem in my Poetry Contest.  Congratulations on your win
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