Epitome of Childhood

EPITOME OF CHILDHOOD

Why hide in a dark cave, underneath,
when you can be running the playground?

10/15/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 8:55 PM
Great epitome - the use of the word 'running' is brilliant and so is the imagery. Bravo.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 9:51 PM
Thank you, Line! Hugs, Kim
Pandit Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Lovely thought!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 10:54 AM
Thanks. vijay!
Melugin Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Excellent epitome, Kim! So encouraging to children to be all they can be! Your message needs to be on the wall of every classroom in the world! my best to you, chuck
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 10:55 AM
How nice to say :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace