Epiphyte

This canopy has choked out the light making the forest of life redundantly obscure. a coffin for my home; where trees form walls, confining me to this empty space. Night comes with it sighs of painful, sorrow - filtering through vegetation. Shadows breed coyotes out of darkness, hidden in acres of howling, and taunting. Where I am a cursed duck with one wing stuck on a fence, my compass set north. Everything is looking down from here; so willfully strong but, direly bending to twist, and tangles of over growth. No need for changing locks; those slithering vines made their way off with my valuables. From my prospective time is left on the lease, but I have already vacated, gone away - away like the sun. Epiphyte
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 11:13 PM
Congrats Edwin on this poem making it to first round competition luv..good luck..
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 9:58 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Edwin. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 8:45 AM
Edwin, Congratulations on your poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
Plotczyk Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Wonderful concrete poem. Nicely done! Very creative. -Congrats
Brown Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Edwin. Love, Carol
Baldwin Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Thank you Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Edwin
Baldwin Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Thank you Dr Ram
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May 29, 2011 at 8:24 PM
I loved the way it dangled its title epiphytically at the bottom. I thought the middle line Everything is looking down from here; was very apt. This is one concrete poem that doesn't need re-bar. Congratulations on its featured status. Thanks for sharing
Baldwin Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Thank you James
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May 29, 2011 at 5:02 PM
deep Edwin,..~ also~ Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. Nice to stop by and check out all featured poem. Have a wonderful day~always,..p.d.
Baldwin Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Thank you p.d.
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