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Epiphyte

This canopy has choked out the light making the forest of life redundantly obscure. a coffin for my home; where trees form walls, confining me to this empty space. Night comes with it sighs of painful, sorrow - filtering through vegetation. Shadows breed coyotes out of darkness, hidden in acres of howling, and taunting. Where I am a cursed duck with one wing stuck on a fence, my compass set north. Everything is looking down from here; so willfully strong but, direly bending to twist, and tangles of over growth. No need for changing locks; those slithering vines made their way off with my valuables. From my prospective time is left on the lease, but I have already vacated, gone away - away like the sun. Epiphyte

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/2/2011 11:13:00 PM
Congrats Edwin on this poem making it to first round competition luv..good luck..
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Edwin. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 8:45:00 AM
Edwin, Congratulations on your poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:15:00 AM
Wonderful concrete poem. Nicely done! Very creative. -Congrats
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Edwin. Love, Carol
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Edwin Baldwin
Date: 5/31/2011 6:05:00 PM
Thank you Carol
Date: 5/30/2011 6:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Edwin
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Edwin Baldwin
Date: 5/31/2011 6:05:00 PM
Thank you Dr Ram
Date: 5/29/2011 8:24:00 PM
I loved the way it dangled its title epiphytically at the bottom. I thought the middle line Everything is looking down from here; was very apt. This is one concrete poem that doesn't need re-bar. Congratulations on its featured status. Thanks for sharing
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Edwin Baldwin
Date: 5/31/2011 6:06:00 PM
Thank you James
Date: 5/29/2011 5:02:00 PM
deep Edwin,..~ also~ Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. Nice to stop by and check out all featured poem. Have a wonderful day~always,..p.d.
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Edwin Baldwin
Date: 5/31/2011 6:06:00 PM
Thank you p.d.

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