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Epiphany: a Poet In Love

Did Shakespeare ever fall in love? A rose by any other name would stink as sweet! What would Y'eshua say if indeed Magdalene was his favorite disciple? What miracles would he impress her with So as to savor her forbidden apple? O woman! Is that why god made you last of all nature's enviable beauty? If before he said let there be light You were the first thing his devine eyes saw I bet creation would have been a different theory altogether. If love at first sight was a figure of speech Then I swear I love you like a metaphor And your smile is a typo They meant to say a simile I will kiss your face like a blank page And my lips will be the tip of my pencil Drawing drooling hieroglyphs like the hand of god Inscribing Ten Commandments of Love On the tablets of your breasts Because my name is Moses A stammerer on a voyage to save a lonely soul From the shackles of cynicism On love affairs. I would love to laugh while making rough love to you On the dark floor of my solitude cell Where torn pages of amatuerish poems lay as a carpet Because you are my words: Maybe your face is the sky And your eyes are the stars Maybe your laughter is a symphony Of a million harps from a million virgin angels I have written about love a million times And still you remain elusive A mystery Are you an acrostic; So each letter tells your tale? Maybe a couplet or limerick? Are you a sonnet? Or a ballad? Or a metre without a rhyme? Maybe you are a mere syllable I mumble at every sudden ******. Your body is a symmetry of regular ryhthm Consumate from five to seven And back to five Haiku: Japanese poets should build a pedestal for you And all lustful lads Should come and slink the slank at your feet Indeed lady, Your gait and pride and smell of shaven armpits and eyeballs might make a eunuch have an ******** And that to me Is amorous injustice! Tell me, What can a scribe do? When all I write about is human weakness And wickedness? When writing to me is an escape from adjectives I can't utter over a cup of coffee? To me, The strand of your hair alone Deserves atleast umpteenth stanzas of praise A prerequisite. If I say I love you Will you giggle at my palpability? Why bore you with parables When all you yearn for is a touch And forever? I will say no more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/4/2016 5:14:00 AM
Good one
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Date: 1/3/2014 3:02:00 PM
nice and deep poem,MYQ
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Date: 1/3/2014 7:09:00 AM
MYQ, you made my day with this lovely poem, a remarkable satire about love, well-crafted and phrased to bring out its amessage. Thank you for sharing, and have a happy poetic year.
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Date: 1/3/2014 3:42:00 AM
A quite interesting piece... I love the ponderables at the opening. Well done.
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Date: 12/30/2013 1:53:00 PM
MYQ, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, This is deep!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2013 7:13:00 PM
MYQ, a very touching write.. Lovely in every way, a nice touch on the ending line. , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/28/2013 7:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda. I will look at the contest right away.
Date: 12/28/2013 7:02:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Myq! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2013 7:24:00 PM
Thank you, Anne. Happy New Year!

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