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Epiphany

For Epiphany Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

“Whereof one cannot speak, thereof one must be silent.” ~ Ludwig Josef Johann Wittgenstein

As I embarked upon the world, 
I absorbed an idea
that there was some great truth to find.
Coming to believe
that if I didn't possess it, I would be missing 
something essential -
like a tin man without a heart.
How could I find this truth?
Would it be through hard work -
study or life experience,
or would it be powerful or divine,
an epiphany 
delivered by some kind of angel?
On all the stops that I visited on the road to find out - 
parents, siblings, teachers,
books, religious texts, gurus, 
philosophers, artists,
people with degrees, 
I asked, "What is the truth?"
and my mind became a jumbled, cacophonous mess.
I took a break from the road to truth
to take solace in nature.
For fun, I asked a tree, a hummingbird, and a lake,
"What is the truth?"
No epiphany -
I heard only silence, 
beautiful silence.
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Borg Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 2:57 PM
Silence may be golden but your path to epiphany outshines it all. A great win, David.
Crandall Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 7:35 PM
Haha, thanks, Pascal!
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 12:00 PM
- Beautiful drawing and fun poem, David :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 2:30 PM
Hi Anne-Lise - thanks! I'm glad you liked my hummingbird! Have a great week!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 1:40 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun 'Epiphany" write again. Have a blessed day/weekend with your wonderful win...............
Crandall Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 7:10 PM
Thanks, Paula! Have a great weekend!
Rodgers Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 8:31 AM
Hello David, Ok this is a masterful piece of poetic philosophy. That trajectory from the restless, noisy intellectual quest for some elusive "great truth" to the stillness of nature, is a journey so many of us spend a lifetime walking. Opening with Wittgenstein sets the stage perfectly, but your poem brings that abstract logic right down to earth. Such an elegant, ironic grace in discovering that after questioning all, the ultimate answer was waiting in the leaf of a tree and a lake. Blessings, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 3:27 PM
Hi Daniel - thanks! I noticed from your recent poems that you listened to a lot of Simon and Garfunkel. I think Simon wrote a little song called "Something so Right" - haven't heard it in years, but I think that phrase is pretty good at describing nature.
La France Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 3:52 AM
Soupmail 👀
Wolf Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 7:41 PM
Well-done, my friend. Well-done. Although I usually take my silence medium-rare.
Crandall Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 3:22 PM
Haha, and I recommend it with a grain of salt. Silence is pretty good most of the time, but then it gets so danged quiet.
Smith  Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 4:26 PM
David, this is a profound and beautifully written poem. I love how you contrasted the "jumbled, cacophonous mess" of seeking truth through human philosophy with the grounding peace found in nature. The transition from your busy search to the final, peaceful image of the tree, hummingbird, and lake is so evocative. Finding the ultimate answer in "beautiful silence" is a wonderful reflection of your opening quote. Thank you for sharing such a reflective and moving piece!
Crandall Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 3:27 PM
I leveraged my confusion for this one😄
Crandall Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 3:20 PM
Thanks, Alison!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 11:34 AM
What a creative/fun ~ write/picture you have here. Love It... Oh yes, silence can be so beautiful.   "Good Luck" I also did this wonderful contest. Have a fun day writing away..........
Crandall Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 11:50 AM
Thanks, Paula - have a great Sunday!
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