Written 20 June 2026 for Dovetailing Two Forms Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud
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A sudden star brightens the sky, Dispelling shadows far and high. A truth unfolds, a hidden seam, Stirred from a long-awaited dream. A new path sparkles, Where pitch gloom used to prevail, Hope shines from within.
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