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Epi-Desperate

You called me by his
name last night...

I answered


11/29/19

For the: Hit Me With Your Epi-Pen Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy

humorsadepigram

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Gershon Wolf

November 30, 2019 at 8:23 PM

Whoa! Bullseye, Archer! ~ gw

Chris Green

December 2, 2019 at 8:21 AM

Thanks my friend.

Eve Roper

November 30, 2019 at 2:42 AM

oops ; good one

Chris Green

December 2, 2019 at 8:20 AM

Thank you Eve.

Kim Rodrigues

November 29, 2019 at 7:04 PM

So great! Surely desperate. Perhaps she calls all (oh no) her lovers the same.

Chris Green

December 2, 2019 at 8:20 AM

Perhaps...you never know. : ) Thanks Kim

Becca Teagan

November 29, 2019 at 4:11 PM

lol This is awesome, powerful, and direct. Well done!

Chris Green

November 29, 2019 at 4:23 PM

Thank you so much my friend.

Ann Foster

November 29, 2019 at 2:33 PM

Wow...... wow.... the heart can betray... but yet, dreams are not truth, just unbound thoughts let loose... when they should be, pinned and sewn into place. Your pen is sharp... your emotions, deep... Ann

Chris Green

November 29, 2019 at 2:37 PM

Thank you so very much Ann. I am glad you liked this one.

Andrea Dietrich

November 29, 2019 at 1:38 PM

oh wow!! I like this A LOT

Chris Green

November 29, 2019 at 2:03 PM

Thank you Andrea

Heidi Sands

November 29, 2019 at 12:44 PM

The poem gives the shock of hearing it. and then the mystery, of what you did answer!? Great one Chris :)

Chris Green

November 29, 2019 at 12:56 PM

Thanks Heidi. Hopefully it shocks Maureen when it comes time to judge the contest. : )

Sandra Adams

November 29, 2019 at 11:47 AM

Ouch and wow... this is powerful my friend, so few words yet delivers a punch! I am sure this one will be on the win list! Excellent penning Chris... hugs :)

Chris Green

November 29, 2019 at 11:56 AM

Thanks so much Sandy. Just a little humor on a rainy Friday. I appreciate you my friend.

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