Epic

what I was looking for was but a fragment a very small fragment of what I found hidden amongst the clutter of broken dreams and hearts I found you epic: resplendent, splendiferous, not enough adjectives to describe although I read them all thought of each rejected them as lacking

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James Horn

Date: 8/17/2015 5:28:00 AM

Of my mind I had fond a fragment, And what I wanted was your consent To this poem try to continue on Until both of us are finally gone. Forever for poem shopped around And sooner or later I was bound To find one with much perfection If I can come up with the connection. And hope I did. Jim Horn

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 10:24:00 PM

Deeper than I thought