Envy's Seed

We came at birth, all equal in God’s eye
Yet, winds blew aloft, Envy’s cursed seed.
Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie.

The fertile soil beguiles, rooting on the sly.
Black veils of mistrust tinting each good deed!
We came at birth, all equal in God’s eye.

Despair rides the rails without alibi
Gaining companions, divided by greed. 
Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie.

Privilege and fame, an Icarus sky
Blinds our soul, it blocks the truth before us;
We came at birth, all equal in God’s eye.

Life’s reward still illusive, cry or try.
Bind us to our conscience with chains we plead.
Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie.

If submit we will, our death awaits neigh.
We will to Envy’s sour fruit concede.
We came at birth, all equal in God’s eye.
Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Proxenos Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 11:27 PM
What a heartwarming deep Villanelle you wrote Ken. Envy is the root of all evil and from the beginning of time it existed and exits,giving in to unequaled greed to this very day, although 'We came at birth, all equal in God's eye. Hatred warms the bed where evil will lie'. Your write is so so true and I couldn't agree with you more. Wonderful write Ken, Blessings, Jennifer.
Rone Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 11:06 AM
Jennifer- I am so honored for your read of this oldie. Your opinions are held in high esteem by myself an all Soupers. As I read my copy of "Reflections..." I mark the pieces I want to go back to or share. Your "What Have You Done" is the only one in the compilation with THREE check marks! Best - Ken
Lawrence Avatar
December 31, 2022 at 12:10 PM
Beautifully composed with poignant heartfelt words. I love the nuance and the rhythm. All best wishes for a happy healthy 2023 ! Blessings, Susan :)
Rone Avatar
January 1, 2023 at 12:48 PM
That is a very kind and graccious comment Susan. I thank you and I'm honored. Best - Ken
Poet Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 6:21 PM
Ken, Your sense of style is nearly flawless. I really like how effectively this villanelle fits with the subject matter, which is about the germ of envy. Your villanelle lines were lovely to read. Thanks for your comment on my page.
Rone Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 9:01 AM
Thank you for reconnecting Mr. G. And thsnk you for youe too-kind comments.
Seeker Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 7:31 PM
Hope these wise words are widely read
Anaya Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 6:06 PM
Envy's seed makes for a perfect villanelle, love the subject matter, Ken Rone. Look forward to reading more poems! ~Anaya
Rone Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Thank you for taking the time to review my backlog. I greatly appreciate your encouragement. Best - Ken
Chies Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 4:25 AM
Beautiful poem, congratulations.
Rone Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 9:24 AM
I am so honored that you read my poem Marco and that you took the time to connect. Best - Ken
Jayasankar Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 7:44 AM
"We came at birth, all equal in God's eye", how true isn't it?...Enjoyed reading your words in Villanelle form Ken Ron...God bless...~ Ani
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 12:23 PM
Hello Ken Ron, how nice it would be if there were no hatefulness in the world. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 3:26 PM
Hello Ken, yes i hope so to. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Rone Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Darlene. May peace and love reign.
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