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Envy's Seed

We came at birth, all equal in God’s eye Yet, winds blew aloft, Envy’s cursed seed. Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie. The fertile soil beguiles, rooting on the sly. Black veils of mistrust tinting each good deed! We came at birth, all equal in God’s eye. Despair rides the rails without alibi Gaining companions, divided by greed. Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie. Privilege and fame, an Icarus sky Blinds our soul, it blocks the truth before us; We came at birth, all equal in God’s eye. Life’s reward still illusive, cry or try. Bind us to our conscience with chains we plead. Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie. If submit we will, our death awaits neigh. We will to Envy’s sour fruit concede. We came at birth, all equal in God’s eye. Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie.

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Date: 2/15/2024 11:27:00 PM
What a heartwarming deep Villanelle you wrote Ken. Envy is the root of all evil and from the beginning of time it existed and exits,giving in to unequaled greed to this very day, although 'We came at birth, all equal in God's eye. Hatred warms the bed where evil will lie'. Your write is so so true and I couldn't agree with you more. Wonderful write Ken, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Ken Rone
Date: 2/19/2024 11:06:00 AM
Jennifer- I am so honored for your read of this oldie. Your opinions are held in high esteem by myself an all Soupers. As I read my copy of "Reflections..." I mark the pieces I want to go back to or share. Your "What Have You Done" is the only one in the compilation with THREE check marks! Best - Ken
Date: 12/31/2022 12:10:00 PM
Beautifully composed with poignant heartfelt words. I love the nuance and the rhythm. All best wishes for a happy healthy 2023 ! Blessings, Susan :)
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Ken Rone
Date: 1/1/2023 12:48:00 PM
That is a very kind and graccious comment Susan. I thank you and I'm honored. Best - Ken
Date: 10/20/2022 6:21:00 PM
Ken, Your sense of style is nearly flawless. I really like how effectively this villanelle fits with the subject matter, which is about the germ of envy. Your villanelle lines were lovely to read. Thanks for your comment on my page.
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Ken Rone
Date: 10/21/2022 9:01:00 AM
Thank you for reconnecting Mr. G. And thsnk you for youe too-kind comments.
Date: 8/3/2022 7:31:00 PM
Hope these wise words are widely read
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Date: 7/24/2022 6:06:00 PM
Envy's seed makes for a perfect villanelle, love the subject matter, Ken Rone. Look forward to reading more poems! ~Anaya
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Ken Rone
Date: 7/26/2022 9:29:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to review my backlog. I greatly appreciate your encouragement. Best - Ken
Date: 4/27/2022 4:25:00 AM
Beautiful poem, congratulations.
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Ken Rone
Date: 4/27/2022 9:24:00 AM
I am so honored that you read my poem Marco and that you took the time to connect. Best - Ken
Date: 3/4/2022 7:44:00 AM
"We came at birth, all equal in God's eye", how true isn't it?...Enjoyed reading your words in Villanelle form Ken Ron...God bless...~ Ani
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Date: 3/3/2022 12:23:00 PM
Hello Ken Ron, how nice it would be if there were no hatefulness in the world. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/3/2022 3:26:00 PM
Hello Ken, yes i hope so to. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Ken Rone
Date: 3/3/2022 1:23:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. May peace and love reign.

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