Sara Kendrick Poet Rengay

Envy of the Bermise Alps

Stalwart Alps beauty sees
Wild crocus blooms at your feet
White around your crown

Daffodils blowing in wind
Sun shines brightly once again

Glorious vibrant 
Hues, reflect the rays, much joy
Eyes take and treasure

Daffodils shout a 
Welcome to spring, trumpeting
To Narcissus' song

Cool breeze blow against the blooms
Welcome colors fragrant joy

Daffadown Dilly
Jonquil a Southern beauty
Amaryllis' gift

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John Freeman March 18, 2010 at 7:23 PM Congratulations on a first place Sara. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards March 18, 2010 at 6:19 PM Great work, Sara...you and Doris did a wonderful job on this joined effort! 1st place..hooray for you both! ~ Love, Carrie

Doris Culverhouse March 18, 2010 at 4:50 PM congrats on the first place win, my partner!! Yeah!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 18, 2010 at 3:14 PM Congrats on your 1st place win in The Twining contest.. a wonderful win and great collaboration poetry .. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie

Gerard Keogh Jr. March 16, 2010 at 3:44 PM You are so much better at this form than I could ever be. I will just enjoy this which is both fanciful and whimsical and I wish you good luck always. Thank you for your kind remarks, Sara! Regards, Gerard!

Brian Strand March 16, 2010 at 3:50 AM Sara thank you for your welcome comment today.Rgds Brian

Doris Culverhouse March 15, 2010 at 4:57 PM enjoyed good ending mom--have a good night

Doris Culverhouse March 15, 2010 at 4:35 PM I worote the 2 lines and you are to write three lines, and that is the conclusion!! we did it. :) ("v")

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 15, 2010 at 4:19 PM Lovely words Sara .. and in Rengay style too.. is is for the new contest? I just entered mine "Calendar Caviar" with a new poet co writer Ray Dillard... this is a breathtaking portrait of Spring..luv.. Linda-Marie

Lynette Chachere March 15, 2010 at 2:24 PM (: pretty picture. your genuis on imagery, Sara! its like you make pictures show up in the minds of your readers.lol -Always&Forever Lynette

Doris Culverhouse March 15, 2010 at 12:37 PM I have done the next verse--check it out. What did daddy say about the hotel?

Doris Culverhouse March 15, 2010 at 12:32 PM good come back!! let me think on it.