Envy

The green envy I lick from your ear
as the brocade chokes you-
take flight of a vengeful fear
The green lessens as moments
pass whirlwinds never lose their pace
as moments pass
You keep the brocade tight and
forget all else outside.
Consumed by green,
from that you are strictly forbidden.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 16, 2014 at 11:29 AM
Amy, wow... I don't know about that green in the ear... eeewwww! However, relationships are at its best when all the green fades away.... ps... nice featured poem..LINDA
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March 11, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Hi Amy, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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July 16, 2010 at 3:14 PM
I love it, very nice stance "the green envy I lick from your ear" my favorite part by far, thanks for sharing and commenting on my work, much love!
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July 10, 2010 at 3:30 AM
WOW!, this is so good..thank you for sharing this work of art...always Michael
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