Envy

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The sin of Envy-
   a sin of self-indulgence
that scorns everything
   one can't do or have.
Envy hates- feels entitled-
   whether earned or not.


October 18, 2018

Contest: Bite-Size Poem No29 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Form: Choka  5 - 7 - 5 - 5 - 7 - 5

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/18/2018 11:29:00 PM

"...whether earned or not..." Astute observation, Sandra. Best wishes in the contest! Carolyn

Sandra Haight
Date: 10/19/2018 8:22:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn, for your visit and supportive comment. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra