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Within one sweet dream My eyes adored purity Within one drizzle A combination of a dream and being caught in a quick shower this last Friday, supplied the inspiration.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/20/2010 7:27:00 AM

Congrats Cecil on your 2nd place win in Rick's contest.. wonderful words...wonderful win.. luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/19/2010 5:55:00 PM

Lovely Haiku, and what a sweet dream to have!! Congratulations, Cecil!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/19/2010 5:51:00 PM

wow you got second?? THAT's GRRREAT!!! Luv, andrea

Rick Parise

Date: 5/19/2010 4:43:00 PM

So very nice Cecil~~Congrats to you for placing 2nd in my contest!!!~Rick

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2010 9:34:00 AM

It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Cecil. Wishing you the best in the contest. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2010 7:32:00 PM

There is a certain "purity" that is unique to rain. Nicely penned, Cecil. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/18/2010 6:54:00 PM

very nice!! we got a down pour today a quick one.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/18/2010 6:52:00 PM

Nice one. Good luck