Envisage

Within one sweet dream
My eyes adored purity
Within one drizzle






A combination of a dream and being caught in a quick shower this last Friday, supplied the 
inspiration.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 7:27 AM
Congrats Cecil on your 2nd place win in Rick's contest.. wonderful words...wonderful win.. luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
Richards Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Lovely Haiku, and what a sweet dream to have!! Congratulations, Cecil!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 5:51 PM
wow you got second?? THAT's GRRREAT!!! Luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 9:34 AM
It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Cecil. Wishing you the best in the contest. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 7:32 PM
There is a certain "purity" that is unique to rain. Nicely penned, Cecil. Hope you are doing well. Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 6:54 PM
very nice!! we got a down pour today a quick one.
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 6:52 PM
Nice one. Good luck
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