Environmental Destruction

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                                                Ornamental bird
                                         Silver coated on den shelf
                                            Oil coated soon death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Knop Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Yes, this oil spell is a great tragedy, well written Haiku, Sara and congrats on your win. Thanks for your kind comments...Gert
Ahmad Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 5:02 AM
Congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 8:27 PM
The last line really has impact. Congrats on making it into the winners circle, Sara! Luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
May 16, 2010 at 6:20 AM
Sara, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 8:57 PM
Congratulations Sara, on your success in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses
A   Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 1:52 PM
well done, Sara, enjoyed,..p.d.
Fraser Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Sara, many congratulations on your win in Raul's contest >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Sara in Raul's contest .. wonderful and intricate words.. am having an eye procedure today so probably won't be on Soup for a whole day at least... wanted to let u know... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Moreno Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 12:16 AM
Sara, congratulations on your placement in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul
Jordan Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Sara- Great haiku with a twist - God Bless, mj
Haick Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 4:06 PM
Just disgusted at this horrid situation...some one should be held responsible and the corporate giant who cause this mess should pay not only for the clean up, but the many families who now have lost their income..Greed!!! That's all it is.. Peace, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 3:57 PM
No not new.. still working remnants of the old... what to do when man won't let go? glad u enjoyed "Energies" ..luv. Linda-Marie
Sweetheart Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 3:29 PM
A fantastic write for the contest Sara and good luck with such powerful words in this Haiku.. enjoyed your title states it all.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Culverhouse Avatar
May 13, 2010 at 3:01 PM
sick--just sick
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