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Environmental Destruction

. Ornamental bird Silver coated on den shelf Oil coated soon death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/22/2010 1:09:00 PM
Yes, this oil spell is a great tragedy, well written Haiku, Sara and congrats on your win. Thanks for your kind comments...Gert
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Date: 5/22/2010 5:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/20/2010 8:27:00 PM
The last line really has impact. Congrats on making it into the winners circle, Sara! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Tainted Feathers" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 6:20:00 AM
Sara, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/14/2010 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations Sara, on your success in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/14/2010 5:45:00 PM
A winner ~~~~Congrats to you!!!!nice angle~Rick
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Date: 5/14/2010 1:52:00 PM
well done, Sara, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/14/2010 10:56:00 AM
Sara, many congratulations on your win in Raul's contest >> James
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Date: 5/14/2010 4:53:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Sara in Raul's contest .. wonderful and intricate words.. am having an eye procedure today so probably won't be on Soup for a whole day at least... wanted to let u know... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/14/2010 12:16:00 AM
Sara, congratulations on your placement in my Tainted Feathers contest...Raul
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Date: 5/13/2010 7:54:00 PM
good luck Sara !!! I like your style~Rick
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Date: 5/13/2010 5:15:00 PM
Sara- Great haiku with a twist - God Bless, mj
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:06:00 PM
Just disgusted at this horrid situation...some one should be held responsible and the corporate giant who cause this mess should pay not only for the clean up, but the many families who now have lost their income..Greed!!! That's all it is.. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:57:00 PM
No not new.. still working remnants of the old... what to do when man won't let go? glad u enjoyed "Energies" ..luv. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:29:00 PM
A fantastic write for the contest Sara and good luck with such powerful words in this Haiku.. enjoyed your title states it all.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:01:00 PM
sick--just sick
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