Enveloped In Fog

enveloped in fog

the bonfire night party ends...

is life a damp squib ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations Brian on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol
K. Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 1:54 AM
congrats Brian! That last line of yours relaly made me think-- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Congratulations, Brian!
George   Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 9:32 AM
Very thought evoking Haiku, Brian. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Elane
Kendrick Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 5:10 AM
Very descriptive write that takes me back to a few bonfires years ago..Thanks for the info..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 6:40 PM
Thankxxxx for my HM in your A Couple OF Words Contest for Passenger.. it was a fun contest to write for and create something new.. with luv.. "Sweetheart" in the Islands...
Sweetheart Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 6:39 PM
Congrats Brian on your HM for your Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable write and honor to enjoy on the 4th of July.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii... AlohA...
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 1:15 AM
I saw Chris wrote "off the wall" But it's cool too! LUv, Andrea
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