Enveloped In Fog

enveloped in fog the bonfire night party ends... is life a damp squib ?

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations Brian on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Fireworks". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/6/2010 1:54:00 AM

congrats Brian! That last line of yours relaly made me think-- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2010 1:41:00 PM

Congratulations, Brian!

Elaine George

Date: 7/5/2010 9:32:00 AM

Very thought evoking Haiku, Brian. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Elane

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/5/2010 5:10:00 AM

Very descriptive write that takes me back to a few bonfires years ago..Thanks for the info..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 6:40:00 PM

Thankxxxx for my HM in your A Couple OF Words Contest for Passenger.. it was a fun contest to write for and create something new.. with luv.. "Sweetheart" in the Islands...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/4/2010 6:39:00 PM

Congrats Brian on your HM for your Haiku in the Fireworks contest with this remarkable write and honor to enjoy on the 4th of July.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii... AlohA...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2010 1:15:00 AM

I saw Chris wrote "off the wall" But it's cool too! LUv, Andrea